Although it all may be late and incomplete, my experience in writer's craft is one to behold. I've learned so much and improved so much as a writer.
I've found interest in a lot of thing I would have deemed silly previously. I actually enjoy poetry now. I never used to, I never thought much of it and I didn't think I would be good at it. But, with this semester coming to an end, it is now one of my favourite things to do. I just find that it comes so naturally to me and it allows me to express any emotions that I try to bottle up. Seeing a lot of other people's work has been truly inspiring too. Seeing epic speeches and hilarious presentations throughout the class have made this experience a memorable one. Although my mark may not reflect it, I've really grown and improved with this class.
Thank you so much.
Monday, June 11, 2012
Contrast
Dylan
Armitage
HAIKUS
Summer
School
in June, bell rings
Relax,
enjoy the weather
Boiling
air, day spoiled
Winter
Christmas
break, content
Frolic,
play in the snow banks
Too
cold to enjoy.
Bad
I
simply don’t know
Mind
only runs blank
This
is a crappy haiku.
Good
Thesaurus,
practice.
Five
seven five, use big words
Makes a great haiku
Makes a great haiku
Day
Dreams
of other worlds
Shreeking
noise takes it away
Alarm
clock, shut up.
Night
Overly
tired
Oh
my lord, I need a nap.
Blankets
and warm sheets.
I
worry
No
one confirming
my
suspicions, and no one
allaying
my doubts.
Satisfaction
Its
a great feeling
Get
exactly what you want
Wishes
do come true.
Consistent
Lack
consistency
You
do, have my patience? You,
Certainly
do not
Persistent
But,
I cant help it
Inside
of my head, my heart
You
will never leave.
SONNETS
Failure
What
would you have me doing on this day?
Thinking
of rhyme, rhythm and deep meaning
Come
up with something first-class? I just may
But
I have no clue what I am doing
Thinking
and speaking, counting syllables
Not
satisfied with anything written
My
work will be less than honorable
Or
painful, like as if I’ve been bitten
The
teacher’s face is clearly unimpressed
All
the effort put in is now worthless
Put
my head down, pull at hair, clearly stressed
Not
an easy task, one done with finesse
I
give up, I cannot write a sonnet
It
is clear now that my mark will plummet
Success
Don't
lose your heart if failures come with ease;
Build up courage and try again-succeed;
Let failures not disturb your mental peace;
Delayed if mirth is sure to well exceed.
Rewards may come to some in ways unknown;
Rewards may miss the truly talented;
Rewards may make a person sometimes clown;
All flowers aren't born to be well-scented.
Though failures come, our duty we must do;
Let Nature take its time and course it must;
Results could be very untoward too;
Our human eyes cannot avoid road-dust.
The patient man will soon succeed in life;
But one knows not, how long can last one's strife.
Build up courage and try again-succeed;
Let failures not disturb your mental peace;
Delayed if mirth is sure to well exceed.
Rewards may come to some in ways unknown;
Rewards may miss the truly talented;
Rewards may make a person sometimes clown;
All flowers aren't born to be well-scented.
Though failures come, our duty we must do;
Let Nature take its time and course it must;
Results could be very untoward too;
Our human eyes cannot avoid road-dust.
The patient man will soon succeed in life;
But one knows not, how long can last one's strife.
FREE
FORM
Prisoner
Silence
interrupted
He
wakes to find himself behind bars
Alone,
stranded, he panics
Unsure
of what to do next
Out
of options, he screams
Wailing
for help
Not
a sound to be found
His
anger takes over, pouting.
Shouting
once again
Gripping
the cage
Fatigue,
depression, sets in
He's
been beaten, he whines.
On
the floor,sobbing in defeat
nothing
left to do but weep
a
woman enters his chamber
here
to rock the baby back to sleep.
Freedom
Birds
chirping
Warm,
soft air,
cool
breeze encompasses
windows
down, free flowing hair
no
worries
up
all night
memories
being made
no
reason to fright.
Never
regretting.
Enjoy
what's at hand
What
summer's all about
Friends,
drinks and warm sand
This
is what we live for
You'll
laugh, you'll cry, but never pout.
Doesn't
get any better than this
This
is what freedom's all about.
SOUND
Nature's
Calm
Bug
wings flap
Insects
and bee drones
Birds
tweet
Real
noise, not what you'd do on your phones.
River
water flows
Upstream
in perfect form
Wind
settles
The
calm before the storm.
Tin
house
Bang!Bang!Bang!
Rain falls on the in roof
Rain falls on the in roof
Bang!Bang!Bang!
Resembling gunshots, the man's courage goes POOF!
Resembling gunshots, the man's courage goes POOF!
CRASH!
Trees
plummet
CRASH!
The man is scared of it
The man is scared of it
BANG!
Thunder roars
Thunder roars
BANG!
Panic soars
Panic soars
JUST
FOR FUN
Friends
Not
the show, the real ones.
There
for you when it's tough
There
with you when you cry
They
know when you're upset
They
know when you're content
They
make you cry, they make you laugh.
They
cry with you
They
laugh at you.
They
bring out emotions you never thought you had.
They
make you do things you never thought you'd do.
Not
peer pressure, but just being comfortable.
The
ones that you can go up to and say “I love you.”
And you know what they'll say back “ I love you too.”
And you know what they'll say back “ I love you too.”
The
ones that will meet you at your locker and say “What's up
loser?”
And you know you'll say with a smile “I hate you.”
And you know you'll say with a smile “I hate you.”
You
can say “I'll be there for you.”
And
they'll say “I'll be there for you too.”
Friends are forever.
Friends are forever.
CHARACTER PROFILE (SCI-FI)
Artyom
Aleksyev
Education:
N/A
Born:
May 5th, 2016
Birthplace:
Moscow, Russia
Occupation:
Metro Ranger (Private)
About
Me:
I
live in the Moscow Metro and have lived there for the better part of
my life. Shortly after I was born, the bombs that caused us to
retreat into the Metro were dropped. I live at Makarov station and
provide security for the Station against whatever horrors the
irradiated surface/Metro can offer, like the typical mutants we've
grown to call the Dark Ones as well as bandits and other enemies. I
have only recently become a Metro Ranger, I became one to follow in
my father's footsteps, he has taught me all I know. One day I hope to
go to the surface and reminisce on the beauty that formerly was
Moscow.
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